English 111 - Technical Writing

Tuesday, September 19, 2006

Peer Review Reflection

I reviewed Angela's and Jeannine's papers and both were generally very good. For the most part, I was worried that mine wasn't going to be consistent with everyone else's, but it was. The only things I realized from looking at theirs and my drafts is my formatting and usage of long sentences.

Angela reviewed my paper, and she commented on the length of my first paragraph. As I said before, I need to try making my paper readable and to the point.

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